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Got this from mamemo's lj.. (note, not written by her kids)

How would u react if your child wrote a compo like this?


Click on image if you can't read this clearly..

Oh man..couldn't help laughing yet I think I'll be flabberghasted if I were the teacher or the parent..I thought the 2nd compo was kinda imaginative and the student did sorta keep to the required topic..The teacher was actually gonna give him/her a B- but changed it to a C+...

Just now while chatting with meganmacy and talking about these 2 compos, Mong was telling me about her own experience when she was a teacher. One of her students apparently wrote this sentence ..
"Water deep, fish got more.."


Cheeeem......


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ikepod
Apr. 26th, 2004 12:16 am (UTC)
Me is reading. Me laugh. My boss hear. She is mad. I am sad. I jump out window. I see floor. My brain come out. My parents is sad and angry. They become rich and they leave be old on my dead money. They play mahjong and take aeroplane. They happy. Me dead.
angeliatay
Apr. 26th, 2004 12:18 am (UTC)
wah..u fast learner *clap clap*

prove that u can teach an old dog new tricks :D~~
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flipover
Apr. 26th, 2004 12:21 am (UTC)
*faints*
angeliatay
Apr. 26th, 2004 12:37 am (UTC)
hehe..cant wait when our kids start writing their own compos hor..
our turn to really pengsan...
(no subject) - flipover - Apr. 26th, 2004 11:04 pm (UTC) - Expand
inventive_manic
Apr. 26th, 2004 12:21 am (UTC)
ahh i choked on my lemon water while reading it. ouch throat pain. i swear if i were a teacher, i'd be laughing at these crazy compos all day lor. that's why i'm not one. my roommate's bf teaches 5th grade history (11 year olds i think) and he brings in the papers to grade when we're at the laundromat and he lets me read some. aiyoh so funny. and they use ghetto lingo too. jialat. you'll realize that their compos are mostly sentences they rem from tv shows.
angeliatay
Apr. 26th, 2004 12:36 am (UTC)
if im the teacher, i'll probably vomit blood..imagine, most of the compos are prob of this calibre hehe.. That's why Im not a teacher. I don't think i have the patience and willpower...
kodomo
Apr. 26th, 2004 12:31 am (UTC)
I came. I laughed. I died.
angeliatay
Apr. 26th, 2004 12:34 am (UTC)
hmm why does this line sounds like sex to me?
(no subject) - kodomo - Apr. 26th, 2004 12:37 am (UTC) - Expand
lavivaloca
Apr. 26th, 2004 12:40 am (UTC)
but I must say, the kids have pretty nice handwriting ! haa
angeliatay
Apr. 26th, 2004 06:16 am (UTC)
heh..i think so too. My writing when i was a kid was like chicken scratching.come to think of it, it still is..
(no subject) - lavivaloca - Apr. 26th, 2004 06:59 am (UTC) - Expand
alisonrae
Apr. 26th, 2004 12:51 am (UTC)
Can't fault the logic though.
angeliatay
Apr. 26th, 2004 06:15 am (UTC)
heh..but how to grade a paper like that?

oi..im goin ur workplace this week for lunch and to get some stuff..meet up? prob on wed...
(no subject) - alisonrae - Apr. 26th, 2004 06:55 am (UTC) - Expand
(no subject) - angeliatay - Apr. 26th, 2004 08:48 am (UTC) - Expand
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mathtoyz
Apr. 26th, 2004 01:50 am (UTC)
Sounds like someone who thinks in Chinese but writes in English.
angeliatay
Apr. 26th, 2004 06:14 am (UTC)
u referrin to the water/fish sentence right? Yeah..that's what Mong said too. Most chinese ed kids will write like this..I remember my chinese compo used to be the other way round and my teacher tellin me constantly that i cant write the way i think in english..
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angeliatay
Apr. 26th, 2004 06:12 am (UTC)
oh man..I guess kids tend to be honest and tend to be more honest with their feelings. I'm not surprised if there are more of such essays ard..

It's q sad actually..for them to have such cynicism in life and such a young age..If im a parent reading the essay, i probably will have to evaluate myself and think of what i can do to change his negative outlook..easier said than done though..
genetonic
Apr. 26th, 2004 02:21 am (UTC)
Essays
After my A levels, I did relief teaching for 3 months at a neighbourhood sec sch and I got a lot of these "compos" from the normal tech kids. I zapped some and still have them with me.




But......how to mark such compos?!!
angeliatay
Apr. 26th, 2004 06:09 am (UTC)
Re: Essays
u should post some of it up hehe..

i think compos are really tough to mark..the content itself is already so.... In such cases, would you think of contacting the parents and finding more abt the child?
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Re: Essays - angeliatay - Apr. 26th, 2004 08:48 am (UTC) - Expand
jenine
Apr. 26th, 2004 02:43 am (UTC)
I'm weird, (and maybe because I'm really a teacher by profession) but I didn't find this to be funny. I found it to be rather disturbing actually. Grammar and Language, I would pass this child for it, but content, I would worry for the child.

This child has seen waaaay too much of how hurtful the world can be, and it's sad to see innocence lost in such a way. How old is this child anyway? I think he/she may need to see a counsellor soon.

PS: I stumbled across your journal though another LJer and was captivated by Aidan. ;)
angeliatay
Apr. 26th, 2004 06:07 am (UTC)
yeah...i know if it was my kid writing this, i'll b very worried. the kid sounds way too cynical and u can sorta tell what kinda environment he's growin up in based on what he writes. So u arent weird..

u are a teacher right?
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meowmeowfelicia
Apr. 26th, 2004 05:51 am (UTC)
*fwah* If me kid write like first kid, me will jump then die. But if jump, die, then kid will get all money. Then story come true. =P
angeliatay
Apr. 26th, 2004 06:10 am (UTC)
heh..wah..take the easy way out hehe
bbhome
Apr. 26th, 2004 06:37 am (UTC)
very funnie. can imagine the time when Ryan will write such a compo.
angeliatay
Apr. 26th, 2004 08:47 am (UTC)
choi choi..just hope none of our kids write a compo like this!
stephiechai
Apr. 26th, 2004 07:35 am (UTC)
*faint*
Where's the hongyu???

Think I die if any of my girls were to pen down such an essay!!
angeliatay
Apr. 26th, 2004 08:46 am (UTC)
i'll cry if aidan writes something like this :P
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basiecrazy
Apr. 26th, 2004 10:21 am (UTC)
if my kid wrote that, i'd shoot the kid and take the life insurance money. after all, (s)he wouldn't need it anymore.
lolitapop
Apr. 26th, 2004 07:30 pm (UTC)
the first compo would worry me, not because it is frivolous and badly written, but it could mean the kid could possibly be suffering from some kinda trauma from the situation of his family.

some of my kids play down how they feel by writing this way too, and after i speak to them, they open up and really let out whats torturing them inside, and it can be very painful to read. :/
angeliatay
Apr. 26th, 2004 09:15 pm (UTC)
i concur..U can tell from the content of his compo that his home environment isn't v good and the child is basically writing how he feels abt it..

Tough eh..as a teacher, u gotta play lotsa roles including a counsellor. But do u stop there? I mean..once u find out the problems that the child may have, what can be done to help? Not much right?
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